I'd suggest changing the "strikingly wide" to "slightly wider" or some similar order of magnitude in regards to the hips, and justify it as pelvic reinforcement to help carry large loads. I'd also suggest refining the enhancements section of the article. Though I do feature bullet points for ease of summarizing points in my own Taianese Form articles, it's mostly just written, and without so many links. The focus is primarily on the differences from what we would consider a 'baseline' version of the Taianese. I'd also suggest increasing emphasis on their ability to survive disease, parasites and cancer. Most likely won't ever get to looking all mangy, diseased and so forth like a Skaven unless things really take a turn in the setting, but they're made to survive the apocalypse, so some more emphasis on that would be great.