Bio-mecha(Beast) tech approval

Refining and proofreading wiki articles.
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Bio-mecha(Beast) tech approval

Post by Sloanrocks2 » Wed Aug 07, 2019 9:36 pm

name of article: Bio-mecha named Beast with sub articles pertaining to Bio-mecha weapons attached to article
Submitter: Sloanrocks2
date: original wiki article creation 08/7/2018
Updated and adjusted per the suggestions of Uso(gunsight1) on date 8/7/2019

https://shattered-universe.com/doku.php ... :bio-mecha


Bio-mecha has been actively RPed in the Black Forge plot by character Xir (character approved by Bullroarer4)
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Re: Bio-mecha(Beast) tech approval

Post by uso » Wed Aug 07, 2019 10:39 pm

THe article looks good. The only further changes I would be to remove some of the specifics about the weapons. IE: Don't say that the gravity gun does 100g, just stick with the 5-15 points of damage thing.

Approved!
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Re: Bio-mecha(Beast) tech approval

Post by Sloanrocks2 » Thu Aug 08, 2019 5:13 am

I will make the change. Thank you for your seal of approval. I will be adding other articles to get approved soon.
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