Refining and proofreading wiki articles.
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https://shattered-universe.com/doku.php ... int_system
I made a thing. It makes starships float above planets. It also crushes things it doesn't like.
I'm sure other people have made things that do the same thing or similar. Should this remain its own page, or does anyone want to put this under a miscellaneous article? I'm keeping the stompy starships bit, though.
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This looks good, though I do think this should be 'its own page' rather than a generic article that everyone uses.
I would like to see a short history section, maybe include when the Bu-Qi first started using this technology, or a bit of fluff about the first ship it was included on? Also is it something that's included on every ship / how common is it?
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I have to agree. This seems to be something uniquely Bu Qi, and I suggest moving it into their namespace on top of coming up with the history. It doesn't have to be super long or detailed or anything, but knowing you, it's gonna be a great read.