Overall, a pretty solid article. I think it implies that this research group - which doesn't appear affiliated with Tai Pan proper - piggybacked/reverse engineered the Empire's Jongwu efforts to start creating their own as well. At least that's the impression I got, and there's nothing wrong with that. The only criticisms I'd make would be to use the bullet points at the bottom for the most distinctive and important things that need pointing out, rather than the standard traits that are expected of them such as better vision. A single bullet point stating that they're very Taianese in ability would cover a lot actually, but even then it can just be included in the paragraph there too.