[Input] The Bundesdeutsche Interstellar Kaiserreich

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[Input] The Bundesdeutsche Interstellar Kaiserreich

Post by Ham » Wed Jan 09, 2019 5:38 pm

I've never made a nation before, and while I totally didn't steal the Alliance format for it, I would like input before I go full on in writing in depth histories and start detailing. So behold, THE GERMANIC STATES IN SPACE.

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Re: [Input] The Bundesdeutsche Interstellar Kaiserreich

Post by CadetNewb » Fri Jan 11, 2019 8:21 pm

Though the general concept looks good, my main concern is that they are Jord based. It's a planet with lots of magic, and I honestly don't know how this may or may not interfere with whatever plans @Mike and @Kim have. This also ties in to your faction itself, since I'm under the impression it's very much without magic.
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Re: [Input] The Bundesdeutsche Interstellar Kaiserreich

Post by Kim » Fri Jan 11, 2019 9:22 pm

I already talked to Ham about this and it is fine. If this group splintered off at the beginning of human placement in the region with an Elf seer, it would be fine. The Creator species was directly placing humans there, for their purposes, sending one group off into space with an elf might be an interesting experiment. The logic in the creator species' actions are rather nebulous.
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Re: [Input] The Bundesdeutsche Interstellar Kaiserreich

Post by CadetNewb » Sat Jan 12, 2019 6:14 pm

Ah, good to know. I'll give it another pass later once I have time.
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