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by CadetNewb
Fri Nov 15, 2019 8:18 pm
Forum: In Setting Roleplay
Topic: [The Deep] With Strange Aeons
Replies: 4
Views: 50

Re: [The Deep] With Strange Aeons

Explosions shook the ship as alarms wailed, and in an instant later, boarding craft bored through its hull, pirates streaming in before the smoke even cleared. Through the chaos, their leader strode in from the darkness, the choking clouds moving aside to make way for her majesty. Scantily clad in c...
by CadetNewb
Fri Nov 15, 2019 4:25 am
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, Keep Main Hall "STAND AND DELIVER!" a voice boomed. As Jayden turned to face the third soldier, she found herself facing the short, portly, mustachioed man from before. Only, he wasn't portly anymore. Having found his footing, the man had risen, all of his bulk following with him...
by CadetNewb
Thu Nov 14, 2019 1:12 am
Forum: Wiki Workshop
Topic: Rat Form/Immortal Cyan/October 29, 1019
Replies: 4
Views: 64

Re: Rat Form/Immortal Cyan/October 29, 1019

It's looking good - the only complaint I'd have by now is the plethora of bullet-points in the lower section. I suggest keeping it simple and isolated to the key, most defining or unusual traits that deviate even from the rest of the Taianese. This means that you don't need to include stuff like the...
by CadetNewb
Wed Nov 13, 2019 5:38 am
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

Re: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

In an instant, chair feet slid and screeched across the floor, other seats simply toppling as people hurried to rise. Meanwhile, food splattered across the ground as disk-shaped cleaning drones quickly appeared, worriedly trying to clean the mess. Feet clamored across the hard ship deck while hooves...
by CadetNewb
Mon Nov 11, 2019 1:06 am
Forum: Wiki Workshop
Topic: Vanilla Honeysuckle/Immortal Cyan/October 29, 2019
Replies: 3
Views: 73

Re: Vanilla Honeysuckle/Immortal Cyan/October 29, 2019

Overall, a pretty solid article. I think it implies that this research group - which doesn't appear affiliated with Tai Pan proper - piggybacked/reverse engineered the Empire's Jongwu efforts to start creating their own as well. At least that's the impression I got, and there's nothing wrong with th...
by CadetNewb
Sun Nov 10, 2019 10:56 pm
Forum: Wiki Workshop
Topic: Rat Form/Immortal Cyan/October 29, 1019
Replies: 4
Views: 64

Re: Rat Form/Immortal Cyan/October 29, 1019

I'd suggest changing the "strikingly wide" to "slightly wider" or some similar order of magnitude in regards to the hips, and justify it as pelvic reinforcement to help carry large loads. I'd also suggest refining the enhancements section of the article. Though I do feature bullet points for ease of...
by CadetNewb
Fri Nov 08, 2019 9:38 pm
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, Keep Main Hall It didn't matter that dialog had begun though. As they tried to talk, and Viz hopped up and down on her tiptoes like a child wanting to go to the restroom, the warrior of justice continued to count, and panic settled in. "They are still coming through!" a foreign m...
by CadetNewb
Thu Nov 07, 2019 2:41 am
Forum: Kowloon Territories
Topic: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines
Replies: 37
Views: 2705

Re: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines

As she spoke, Xiulan's senses prickled as they caught something; the man was occasionally snatching a lecherously aimed glance at Fate's figure, and very specifically, the angel's figure. Of course, any woman would have noticed, but she saw more than just that, and though these moments were less tha...
by CadetNewb
Tue Nov 05, 2019 4:02 pm
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

Re: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

As the others made their wants clear, Eydis counted who was voting for what in perhaps the oldest way possible. Counting on her fingers. Fortunately, she didn't have to use her toes, nor realize just how silly she looked. "Well, chances are, I think someone will eventually pick up the other jobs bef...
by CadetNewb
Mon Nov 04, 2019 2:19 am
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, Keep Antechamber -> Keep Main Hall As Jayden peered inside, she set eyes on several men-at-arms with assorted weapons, her helmet's feed automatically sending the image to the others at the bottoms of their own displays. With this, they could all see that the room itself had two ...
by CadetNewb
Sun Nov 03, 2019 7:18 pm
Forum: Setting Discussion
Topic: [Interest Check] The Deep
Replies: 13
Views: 337

Re: [Interest Check] The Deep

Sorry, I forgot to post this! https://www.shattered-universe.com/doku ... a_diadottr

I'm imagining she's just coming in some sweats rather than her space pirate queen outfit since she's bored and looking for something to relax to.
by CadetNewb
Wed Oct 30, 2019 5:05 pm
Forum: In Setting Roleplay
Topic: [Star Dragon] Starbright
Replies: 34
Views: 854

Re: [Star Dragon] Starbright

"Hold on, shouldn't we check on them first?" Midnight perked up from beside Ayana. The woman had started tossing fireballs which reflected in her eyes like bright orange-red lights, something she hadn't really ever seen in person. But despite the initial surprise, it wasn't all that different in eff...
by CadetNewb
Wed Oct 30, 2019 11:28 am
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, Keep Bailey/Yard -> Keep Antechamber As they passed through the portcullis and into the castle bailey, it was clear that Viz had plenty to say, even as Royama held onto her hand like a mother and unruly child. "Come on, it's sermon, not sirman! And you can bet I'm gonna cleanse t...
by CadetNewb
Fri Oct 25, 2019 1:58 pm
Forum: Wiki Workshop
Topic: New Origins/Variants
Replies: 3
Views: 94

Re: New Origins/Variants

I believe it would entirely depend on how many differences there are from the base version. If a variant heading and a paragraph or so is enough to convey the changes, then that's fine. However, I suspect the changes you're after are going to be big enough that it'll take a bit more than that. In th...
by CadetNewb
Fri Oct 25, 2019 12:08 am
Forum: Setting Discussion
Topic: Education in the Shattered Universe
Replies: 4
Views: 296

Re: Education in the Shattered Universe

Though already mentioned as being established on the wiki, I'll summarize Tai Pan's education system for propriety's sake. Less jumping around pages and tabs if anyone wants or needs to check. Long story short, they prioritize socialization of their children first. Information and so forth is as eas...
by CadetNewb
Thu Oct 24, 2019 6:12 am
Forum: Wiki Workshop
Topic: New Origins/Variants
Replies: 3
Views: 94

Re: New Origins/Variants

Should have commented a lot sooner, sorry! This was discussed over discord, and the idea definitely has the green light. It'll add some much appreciated diversity to our content and also acknowledge stuff that may have or can happen in RP.
by CadetNewb
Thu Oct 24, 2019 4:52 am
Forum: Kowloon Territories
Topic: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines
Replies: 37
Views: 2705

Re: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines

Sharply turning to face her, the young man's eyes had initially narrowed with suspicion on hearing his name be called out. However, the moment the business magnate's gaze on Xiulan, his expression changed to that of honest surprise. "Your highness, it's a pleasure," Fitzroy quickly replied, giving t...
by CadetNewb
Wed Oct 23, 2019 7:12 am
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

Re: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

"Aww geeze, that's gross!" Eydis exclaimed. "I can't imagine myself licking the reactor core!" the commander's face contorted, tongue sticking out as though she had a foul taste in her mouth. Shaking her head to try and clear her imaginary palate, the the wisp of a woman looked back over to her new ...
by CadetNewb
Tue Oct 22, 2019 7:07 am
Forum: Kowloon Territories
Topic: [Piyapon] The Return
Replies: 5
Views: 111

Re: [Piyapon] The Return

The only way to describe the bubbly woman's expression now, was confused. "Er, why aren't I?" the short tigress asked, opening the door wider and gesturing for Song to come in. "Bob and I are co-workers. We were doing some stuff in this area, so we rented this place for a bit," she explained. On top...
by CadetNewb
Mon Oct 21, 2019 1:51 pm
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, City Square "Darling?" the buxom woman playfully rebuked him, offering him a none-to-serious look of offense. Dropping it quickly though, she leaned into him, a soft warmth pressing against the young man as her bust bumped up against his side. "We're not that intimate. Yet," she ...
by CadetNewb
Mon Oct 21, 2019 6:27 am
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, Portcullis -> Lord's Keep Interior Life as a state trooper was never easy. Already, their routine was monotonous, having to rise at the sound of the morning horn and quickly down their breakfast before taking on their assigned duties. Though maintaining equipment and training was...
by CadetNewb
Fri Oct 18, 2019 8:22 pm
Forum: Wiki Workshop
Topic: Hexacoaxium milligrams/Bullroarer4/05-20-2019
Replies: 7
Views: 806

Re: Hexacoaxium milligrams/Bullroarer4/05-20-2019

Quick update, the current link is; https://www.shattered-universe.com/doku ... :hexaaxium

Should I just move it into the materials section until we figure out more about it?
by CadetNewb
Thu Oct 17, 2019 3:38 am
Forum: Setting Discussion
Topic: [Interest Check] The Deep
Replies: 13
Views: 337

Re: [Interest Check] The Deep

I'm liking the sound of this! I'm thinking of entering Ylfa and having her tackling this out of curiosity if that's ok.
by CadetNewb
Thu Oct 17, 2019 1:02 am
Forum: Kowloon Territories
Topic: [Piyapon] The Return
Replies: 5
Views: 111

Re: [Piyapon] The Return

"Huh?" Bubbly and clueless, the single word coming forth from the infamous military figure did not match their appearance in the slightest. "Oh, I know you!" the woman in front of the Rabbit realized. "You're Song right?" she asked, squatting down until they were almost eye level. "Bob made sure all...
by CadetNewb
Wed Oct 16, 2019 12:10 am
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, Barricade -> Lord's Keep As the group bickered and quarreled amongst each other, Viz initially watched, her interest firmly held by their hi-jinks. However, as they all came to settle and therefore get boring, motion at the perimeter caught her attention. A zombie holding a picke...
by CadetNewb
Tue Oct 15, 2019 11:05 pm
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

Re: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

Sunk into the commander's chair, Eydis took a deep breath and rubbed her temples as she tried to calm herself down and get over her embarrassment. "Hey, no rush to launch," she turned in her seat to call after Beeks. "It's not like we're the IAS Enterprise or something!" Letting out another sigh, sh...
by CadetNewb
Mon Oct 14, 2019 1:14 am
Forum: Kowloon Territories
Topic: [Piyapon] The Return
Replies: 5
Views: 111

Re: [Piyapon] The Return

The moment the door opened, Song's entire short life flashed before her eyes as she was confronted with death incarnate. Before her was the Butcher of Mythenahil, the Bane of Elves, a war criminal responsible for killing untold innocents. And in this moment, this absolute killer, this monster, was s...
by CadetNewb
Fri Oct 11, 2019 7:04 am
Forum: In Setting Roleplay
Topic: [Star Dragon] Starbright
Replies: 34
Views: 854

Re: [Star Dragon] Starbright

"Whaaaaa!" Crying out in surprise, Midnight had quickly darted for cover. However, as things got worse and worse, her ears and then her eyes settled on Aiyana. Though her mind was awash with all the things that were likely gonna happen to them, she couldn't help but feel a pang of pain at seeing the...
by CadetNewb
Fri Oct 11, 2019 6:39 am
Forum: Wiki Workshop
Topic: Taianese Drones
Replies: 0
Views: 68

Taianese Drones

I've went ahead and made a series of quick drone articles for Tai Pan to both fill in vital niches and also to allude or imply how they conduct combat on the infantry scale. Let me know what you guys think. They're just really small blurbs for now though, nothing special. Type 08 Medical Drone Type ...
by CadetNewb
Thu Oct 10, 2019 8:49 pm
Forum: Hailing Frequencies
Topic: Greetings and Salutations
Replies: 3
Views: 110

Re: Greetings and Salutations

Always glad to see another friendly face!
by CadetNewb
Thu Oct 10, 2019 12:18 am
Forum: Kowloon Territories
Topic: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines
Replies: 37
Views: 2705

Re: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines

'Almost everyone,' Johnathan replied, now getting started on another bite-sized snack. Time continued to tick away at a snail's pace as they talked, and it was fortunate that they did, as it gave them a good snap-shot of all the people in question as well. 'This sort of thing is just one way all th...
by CadetNewb
Wed Oct 09, 2019 4:05 pm
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

Re: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

"O-oh, right," Eydis slowed down. "I just realized, I should have brought you guys to your quarters first so you could drop your stuff off. I'm really sorry!" the commander apologized, turning to lead the way "Anyways, going past the other way, we have the main vertical shaft. It's an open lift and ...
by CadetNewb
Tue Oct 08, 2019 2:51 pm
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, Barricade "What are you talking about? That's not the necromancer!" Viz angrily exclaimed at Wu. "That's just the filthy undead that the necromancer wants us to deliver!" Hearing Mac pay attention to her, she immediately shouted, "Purge the heretics! Burn the witches! You know th...
by CadetNewb
Fri Oct 04, 2019 4:58 pm
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

Re: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

"Our assignment is going to be pretty low level stuff," Eydis began, brushing back a few stray strands of straw-yellow hair as she made her way through the airlock. "You know. Um. Scanning shipping containers. Escorting vessels..." the excitement drained from her voice in embarrassment. "It's not mu...
by CadetNewb
Tue Oct 01, 2019 11:40 pm
Forum: In Setting Roleplay
Topic: [Star Dragon] Starbright
Replies: 34
Views: 854

Re: [Star Dragon] Starbright

"Ah, right!" Midnight replied to Bronzi. Pressing forward with the others, the thought of what could happen to them sent chills down her spine, but even so, she wondered something else. The woman prodded and poked at the bodies as she went, hoping to find a weapon that she could use. If there weren'...
by CadetNewb
Mon Sep 30, 2019 4:06 am
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

Re: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

"O-oh, nevermind," Eydis awkwardly replied, beaten to the punch by her XO, briefly nodding to Rebeeka as she arrived. "Well, I at least have some trivia about The Donkey," the blonde replied, making sure her hair bun was in place. "The previous crew actually just up and vanished," the Commander expl...
by CadetNewb
Fri Sep 27, 2019 8:41 pm
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, City Square -> Barricade "Good luck!" the broom riding enchantress waved them off. As they turned to leave however, the squad's Lollipop Saber stooped low. "Oh, you didn't have to!" the black-veiled grandmother exclaimed. Hoisted up by Jayden, the ancient matriarch felt like almo...
by CadetNewb
Fri Sep 27, 2019 5:46 am
Forum: Kowloon Territories
Topic: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines
Replies: 37
Views: 2705

Re: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines

At Xiulan's unspoken question, the young Dragon could see the faint tension of muscles under Fate's face as her expression oh-so-subtly hardened. 'That'd be Tarathiel of Ioengard, the Provincial Governor of Ioengard, naturally,' Johnathan replied, casually munching away at a bit of beef carpaccio in...
by CadetNewb
Fri Sep 27, 2019 4:53 am
Forum: Setting Discussion
Topic: Internal Ship Layout Accounting for Artificial Gravity
Replies: 3
Views: 308

Re: Internal Ship Layout Accounting for Artificial Gravity

Ooof, I'm definitely late. Yes, do add this to the wiki if it hasn't been already!
by CadetNewb
Thu Sep 26, 2019 6:36 am
Forum: Kowloon Territories
Topic: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines
Replies: 37
Views: 2705

Re: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines

"If it pleases you to know, though I was initially shocked, I have I have not taken offense," the angelic woman replied, her expression as stoic and unrevealing as it usually was. Not that this was an obstacle for the Taianese of course. Xiulan could read the woman well enough, and the sympathetic r...
by CadetNewb
Thu Sep 26, 2019 6:11 am
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

Re: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

"R-right, sorry!" the skinny wisp of a woman replied, hunched over for a moment as she recovered. Finally standing up, she looked more fitting behind a library counter than in a military uniform, but here they were. "I am Lieutenant Commander Diadottr, and if that rings a bell, well, I'm Eydis Diado...
by CadetNewb
Thu Sep 26, 2019 4:03 am
Forum: Setting Discussion
Topic: Idea: Species Variants/Origins for Characters
Replies: 2
Views: 103

Re: Idea: Species Variants/Origins for Characters

As mentioned in the discord, this is a pretty good idea. We'll be looking forward to it for sure.
by CadetNewb
Fri Sep 20, 2019 9:15 pm
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

Re: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

"Y-yeah," the wisp of a woman finally replied, finally managing to get a few proper breaths into her lungs. "I'm just so excited and nervous - I've just gotten my first command, and I'm waiting here for my crew...members to....arrive," her voice drifted off as realization began to settle in again af...
by CadetNewb
Fri Sep 20, 2019 9:09 pm
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, City Square "But, but!" Viz began at Jayden. "Sakamoto said Ellie was a predamatory lifeborne! And come on! Zombies! Even you space people deal with lots of those! Like, those poor people in the mall..." the blue haired priestess quailed at the thought. Though the group was still...
by CadetNewb
Thu Sep 19, 2019 6:38 am
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

Re: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

" - and I just need to say, 'Hello, I'm Eyd - AHHH!" Interrupted mid-murmuring to herself, the pacing woman in question leaped back in a panic. "HELLOI'MEYDISDIADOTTRANDI'MGONNABEYOURCOMMANDER!" Squeezing out every single bit of air from her lungs, Eydis quickly found herself completely breathless a...
by CadetNewb
Thu Sep 19, 2019 6:20 am
Forum: Kowloon Territories
Topic: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines
Replies: 37
Views: 2705

Re: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines

In that moment, the look of boyishly innocent hope that Raphael had towards Fate wilted like a dying flower, the lord's eyes rapidly jumping back to Xiulan from his object of affection like candy torn from a young babe's hands. So utterly vicious was her assault that though a scant beat or two had p...
by CadetNewb
Wed Sep 18, 2019 2:44 am
Forum: Kowloon Territories
Topic: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines
Replies: 37
Views: 2705

Re: [Ivory Tower] Lifelines

To say that people were whispering about the young dragon was an understatement. Though they mostly tried to keep it on the down-low, the murmuring visibly spread through the crowd in a wave, with her at the epicenter, and took root like an infectious disease. The vast majority of people here were j...
by CadetNewb
Tue Sep 17, 2019 5:53 am
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] Sakamoto's Comfy Couch - Chapter 1.1
Replies: 0
Views: 77

[The Gentle Breeze] Sakamoto's Comfy Couch - Chapter 1.1

This takes place in Chapter 1, after Jayden joins, but before the scene change and first mission ***** The Gentle Breeze, In Transit For once, things seemed to to be going her way. In many ways, the Taianese were the end-all-be all when it came to the upper crust of society, even to those that didn...
by CadetNewb
Tue Sep 17, 2019 4:23 am
Forum: The Donkey
Topic: [The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1
Replies: 39
Views: 777

[The Donkey] Le Joli Ânesse - Chapter 1

Eden, High Orbit Spacedock 1 The heart of The Interstellar Alliance, Eden System was home to numerous shipyards, defense platforms, power stations and docks that played host to an endless stream of vessels. From the distance, they looked like toys, but as one neared, their scale only grew and grew ...
by CadetNewb
Sun Sep 15, 2019 11:45 pm
Forum: The Gentle Breeze
Topic: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2
Replies: 137
Views: 3954

Re: [The Gentle Breeze] It's a Thriller - Chapter 2

Stadt der Anfänge, City Square "Oh my, so many theatrical dummies, I'm hurt!~" the buxom witch remarked, playfully pretending to swoon in distress at their accusations and threats of violence. However, as one of the nearby buildings collapsed, only for Jayden to stumble out, she laughed. "Tiddy-cat...